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Geography 300

Writing Lab - Part A

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Proper Citations in the Essay Report and Research Paper

Background: One of the problems frequently troubling students is how, when and why to cite or make a bibliographic reference to another author.  Perhaps this confusion stems from the tendency for the citation style to vary, depending on the course and the assignment.  The exercise below should help straighten some of these questions for you.

Goal:  The goal of this exercise is to help students learn how, when and why to make bibliographic references or citation in a writing assignment.

Objectives
1) Students will identify differences and similarities between and among essays, research theses and reports.
2) Students will cite other authors properly in an essay and a research paper.

Assignment: In this section of this assignment, you will first identify examples of essays and research papers.  Then you will construct citations appropriate to each writing genre.  Third, you will construct a short bibliography (or sources cited) page for a research paper.

Steps:

1. Make sure you've read the background information on the webpage you are supposed to read before you get to this one...for most of you its the page where you started this lesson, but others find their way here and begin, but can't answer the first two questions of the quiz over this material..

2. Read the paragraphs in Part I below and examine associated table.  As you read, make a note of the similarities and differences among essays, theses & dissertations (or research papers) and reports. You'll have to answer some questions over this material, AND you'll have to demonstrate that you can do these things later in the semseter, so pay close attention to content.

3. You may want to open the Moodle-based quiz entitled "Writing Lab 1: Part A" associated with this exercise, so you can preview the questions as you read.

Part I: Basic Elements: Essays, Research Papers and Reports:

Essays, research papers and reports each serve different purposes and are therefore constructed differently.  Essays are generally less formal than the other two in terms of citations and bibliography, are generally shorter and are frequently written in the first person. Essays are almost always persuasive.  I tend to characterize essays that I assign in classes as easily read opinion pieces that are backed up by facts and opinions of others, and are written without footnotes or citations and bibliographies, etc.   Opinion pieces in newspapers are essays. 

Research papers are more formally organized arguments that are frequently longer than essays.  Footnotes, citations and bibliographic notes are formally organized so readers can double check on the sources, statistics, opinions and facts the writer uses to support his or her arguments.

Reports are not often written in college because they tend to not to contain an argument, nor do they often require higher order thinking. You probably did 'reports' in grade school, where you would look up a pile of information in an encyclopedia about a topic, like "Peru" or "Martin Luther King Jr. " and you would copy that down, reorganize it, and hand it in. Reports often do not contain an argument or try to prove a point. They are a compendium of "facts".
**answer questions from quiz**

Thesis Statement

A thesis statement is an indispensable feature of both essays and research papers.  The thesis statement is the point you plan to argue in an essay or research paper. You MUST articulate a clear thesis statement in almost every writing assignment you'll have in college. Reports often do not feature a thesis statement because they do not argue for or against position or belief.  

Students frequently fail to include a thesis statement in their compositions. This is a serious error.

The thesis statement looks different in an essay than it does in a research paper. In an essay, the thesis statement is frequently informally stated. For example, you might write in an essay, "A key component of successful Asian development strategies is the education of girls and young women".  The same thesis statement in a research paper is generally going to be phrased more formally so that it can be tested.  One might write "It is hypothesized that the number of years of formal education received by females in Asia has a statistically significant, positive influence on the rate of GDP growth from 1970 to 2005".  After the thesis statement is made, then the rest of the essay or research paper is dedicated to arguing, analyzing and evaluating the validity or strength of the thesis statement.  A report on the other hand, may not be organized that way.  A report may start with the findings and simply present evidence in a sequential manner in support of the finding. 

Citing in an Essay

There are also differences in the way essays and research papers organize and cite supporting evidence.   Essays, even published ones, very rarely make extensive use of citations.  Generally, essays are not full of references to other research papers, or statistics, etc.  Instead, the author puts together a logical argument in which the persuasiveness of the argument itself is key to proving the thesis statement.  Still there are instances where references help you prove your point.  For example, you might write in support of the thesis statement above, "According to a recent United Nations study, over 90% of the women in China, Taiwan, Singapore and Korea are functionally literate and as such make attractive workers for a variety of industries."  Since this passage is an essay, the essay reader is generally asked to take it on faith that the U.N. did indeed report that over 90% of women are functionally literate in those countries. You may make a footnote, but in an essay it is generally omitted. The second half of the sentence (as such make attractive workers...) on the other hand, was not reported by the U.N., but is nevertheless a logical conclusion to draw.  A follow-up sentence might point out that even the most mundane factory work requires at least some literacy skills....or that illiterate women in other countries, who cannot read simple safety instructions, make less desirable workers because they are likely to be more costly in the long-run.  

One of Geography's more famous essayists is J.B. Jackson. Click the link below this paragraph to see an example of a geographer using the essay style to create an effective argument. It has a few references, but most citations are informal and imbedded in the text. Footnotes and citations are done informally.

J.B. Jackson, Future of the Vernacular (or find in Moodle alongside the link where you opened this lab)

Citing in a Research Paper

Research papers cite statistics, opinions and other material much more formally.  Readers of research papers will not simply "take you at your word" and therefore must be directed to the source of your information, or your logic if it was borrowed from some source.  You must make transparent how your argument is supported and you must do so systematically.  In the paragraph above, the passage containing the U.N. reference would perhaps be written: The United Nations reports that over 90% of the women in China, Taiwan, Singapore and Korea are functionally literate (2005, 15). This is important to national economic development because workers with minimal reading and writing skills have proven to be helpful as companies seek to make bigger profits (Jones 1984, 345).  Because this was written in a research paper, readers can turn to the bibliography and find where the U.N. data was originally published.  In this example, the logically informed statement about literate workers being desirable is further strengthened, by reference to another research article by author Jones.  Presumably Jones, who published something in 1984, states on page 345 something to the effect that profits are better in places with literate workers than profits in places with illiterate workers.  In any case, the reader can turn to the bibliography, entitled "References" in the Chicago Style, and find your sources of information and they can check it for themselves.

Reports

Reports are less commonly assigned in college courses, and generally only in introductory courses when they are. One notable exception are papers written in classes where students write environmental impact reports, or cultural impact reports. Marketing/Economic geographers may also occasionally write reports. Most often a report in geography will be assigned to provide students with an avenue to explore an issue or a place.  Writing a report is probably best thought of as writing an encyclopedia entry on some topic.  The reader will use the information to make a decision. Sometimes students are asked to read a chapter or an article and issue a report.  Students are typically not asked to argue any point in a report.  Reports are sometimes presented via PowerPoint style software.

Table of Writing Assignment Characteristics

The table below may help you make a mental catalog of the differences and similarities between and among essays, research papers and reports.

Table of Characteristics
Characteristics Essays Research Papers Reports
Length Generally Short
(several pages or less)

May be very long 
(thousands of pages, chapters)

May be short or long
Style discursive (logically argued, reasoned), but often informally written, perhaps conversational, or debate-like. logically argued, formally argued and written.  not generally conversational, expansive. precise and concise
Research occasionally minimal, though its possible to do extensive research for an essay.

extensive, requiring primary or sometimes secondary data

moderate, generally secondary data
Orientation academic or general audience

academic

business and government, less frequently academic
Organization and Structure yes yes yes
Argument made? yes yes occasionally
Purpose? almost always to persuade to persuade and to inform more often to inform, perhaps with an intention to persuade
Citations opinions and statistics informally cited, typically integrated into sentences formal, organized
(Chicago Style for American Geographers)
varies, but generally citations are included in college reports
Summary Statement in the introductory and concluding paragraphs in the abstract and also in the introductory paragraph. in the executive summary
Bibliography? rarely formal and organized, at the end of paper varies

*The above table was partly adapted from your textbook...Bradford, Michael.  2003.  Writing essays, reports and dissertations.  In Key methods in geography.  eds.,  N. J. Clifford and G. Valentine, 515-532.  Thousand Oaks, CA: Sage


Part II: Citation Guidelines:

When, what and how much to cite is a common problem for students.  Most often, students fail to cite things they should.  However, sometimes students go crazy, citing every last possible idea, notion and number.  Sometimes students unnecessarily cram short biographies of authors into a citation.  Sometimes students unnecessarily replicate the bibliography in the context of the paper.  Leave the bibliographic information for the end.  

Here are some good rules of thumb for you to consult when you are writing a research paper:

When to cite:

  1. When you use the words or ideas from another person.  In other words, anytime you use the words or ideas that are not your own, cite them.  This includes not just quoted material, but also when you paraphrase (or rephrase, recycle ) the words or ideas of someone else. 

It is important to assign credit (or blame) for an idea, because to do otherwise will lead readers to assume what you have written is your own opinion or idea, opening opportunities for possibly embarrassing misunderstandings. 

Examples: examples of the same idea or argument, cited in two ways - one in a research paper and the other in an essay:

  • Correct Citation in a Research Paper:
  • Davis argues that far more resources are dedicated to saving the homes of a few wealthy people in Malibu than are given over to preventative measures that could save the lives of hundreds of thousands of poor people in other parts of L.A.(1998). 
    • This sentence has a citation at the end of it because it is a condensed version of an argument that Davis Makes in his 1998 book.  No page numbers are presented because he makes the argument over a number pages in various parts of the text.  It's a general theme in the book.
  • Correct Citation in an Essay Style Paper: If you were to use Mike Davis' comments in an essay, you might just write: "Mike Davis argues that taxpayers spend far more money saving rich people's houses than we do preventing the deaths of poor people."..

2. Quotations should be cited. The only exception is when the the quote is so very well known that it is "common knowledge". For example, "Read my lips. No new taxes", is an especially well known quote from president George H. Bush, because he had to eat them later in his presidency.  It was so widely replayed on TV, that it is unnecessary to cite this quotation.  Other famous quotes can be treated similarly.

3. Cite statistics generated by someone other than yourself, especially if there is some reason to:
1) doubt the validity of them,
2) are contrary to the point you are making or;
3) variations of that statistic are available.

Do NOT cite a statistic if it is a well known or commonly accepted statistic such as you might find in an encyclopedia.

  • Examples:
  • Correct citation in a research paper :
    • According the U.S. Census Bureau (2001, 45), the median house value in Los Angeles county was $250,000 in 1998, but a report by the Realtor's Board of Los Angeles County (2002, 15) places the median house value $65,000 higher in the same year.
      • * If there was no disagreement on these numbers, this sort of "fact" may not deserve a reference because it may descend to the level of "common knowledge".
  • Incorrect:
    • The population of the United States is roughly 280 million (U.S. Census 2005, 422).
      • *Citation is not necessary because the USA's population, especially as an estimate is common knowledge. 
  • Incorrect: 
    • California has an area of 411,000 square kilometers (World Almanac 1974, 257).
      • *Citation is not necessary because there is little if any controversy about this figure.
  • Correct citation in an essay:
    • The median house value in Los Angeles was $250,000 in 1998 according to the Census Bureau, but a realty organization suggests it was about $65,000 higher that year.
      • * The reader can discern the source of your statistics, even though the citation is informal.

3. Avoid these mistakes!

  • Do not include extraneous materials in a quotation or paraphrase.
    • Incorrect:
      • The famous L.S.U. geographer, Fred Kniffen, wrote in his article "Common Barns of Louisiana", that porches on barns in the Bayou Teche region were frequently made of Cyprus timbers (1965).
        • It is not necessary to note that Kniffen is famous and from L.S.U., nor is it generally necessary to identify the name of the article where this claim was made.  Readers can look that up in the bibliography.  Don't put a bunch of extraneous material in a paper to make it longer. 

For geographers: Consult the Association of American Geographer's (A.A.G.) style sheet for a fuller description of how to construct citations in a geography research paper using "Chicago Style".  You should know that there are many variations on citation rules and style points, but the rules laid out on this style sheet is the standard for geographers in the United States. Here's a more general "quick guide" to the Chicago Style. You may want to print these out, or book mark these pages for future reference.

FOR ADDITIONAL FOOTNOTING/REFERENCING GUIDELINES SEE ALSO: CSUN's library research and plagiarism help page


Part 3: Sample Essay

In this part of the Writing Lab A, you will look over a writing sample below and answer some questions about it. These questions are designed to check to make sure that you understand the fundamentals presented in the paragraphs above.

Look over the writing sample "Cats and Dogs" below (or click to open link) and answer the following questions in Moodle (a window you may already have open).

Cats and Dogs

A dog is man's best friend." That common saying may contain some truth, but dogs are not the only animal friend whose companionship people enjoy. For many people, a cat is their best friend. Despite what dog lovers may believe, cats make excellent housepets.

In the first place, people enjoy the companionship of cats. Many cats are affectionate. They will snuggle up and ask to be petted, or scratched under the chin. Who can resist a purring cat? If they're not feeling affectionate, cats are generally quite playful. They love to chase balls and feathers, or just about anything dangling from a string. They especially enjoy playing when their owners are participating in the game. Contrary to popular opinion, cats can be trained. Using rewards and punishments, just like with a dog, a cat can be trained to avoid unwanted behavior or perform tricks. Cats will even fetch!

In the second place, cats are civilized members of the household. Unlike dogs, cats do not bark or make other loud noises. Most cats don't even meow very often. They generally lead a quiet existence. Cats also don't often have "accidents." Mother cats train their kittens to use the litter box, and most cats will use it without fail from that time on. Even stray cats usually understand the concept when shown the box and will use it regularly. Cats do have claws, and owners must make provision for this. A tall scratching post in a favorite cat area of the house will often keep the cat content to leave the furniture alone. As a last resort, of course, cats can be declawed.

Lastly, one of the most attractive features of cats as housepets is their ease of care. Cats do not have to be walked. They get plenty of exercise in the house as they play, and they do their business in the litter box. Cleaning a litter box is a quick, painless procedure. Cats also take care of their own grooming. Bathing a cat is almost never necessary because under ordinary circumstances cats clean themselves. Cats are more particular about personal cleanliness than people are. In addition, cats can be left home alone for a few hours without fear. Unlike some pets, most cats will not destroy the furnishings when left alone. They are content to go about their usual activities until their owners return.

Cats are low maintenance, civilized companions. People who have small living quarters or less time for pet care should appreciate these characteristics of cats. However, many people who have plenty of space and time still opt to have a cat because they love the cat personality. In many ways, cats are the ideal housepet.

Grateful acknowledgment: http://members.tripod.com/~lklivingston/index.html

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