History 342

World Since 1945

Devine

Helpful Hints for the Second Paper…

 

If you can follow the instructions on this hand-out, you will be well on your way to producing a good paper.

 

Choosing a topic and introducing it to the reader

 

Since the purpose of this exercise is to explore how a single event can be interpreted differently based upon one’s point of view, I recommend picking a topic that is likely to have produced different responses depending on the sources you consult.  Such topics might include the origins of the 1967 Arab-Israeli war, the Great Leap Forward in China, the Chernobyl disaster in the USSR, the UN’s role in the Rwandan genocide, or the 1964 escalation of US involvement in the Vietnamese conflict.

 

All of these events were controversial and therefore were interpreted differently by different nations, so your sources will provide you with varying points of view.

 

Try to focus your paper on a specific event.  For example, “The Arab-Israeli Conflict” is too broad, while “The 1981 assassination of Anwar Sadat” is a more manageable topic.  Similarly, “The Vietnam War” is too broad, but “Reaction to the Mai Lai massacre of March 1968” would be fine.

 

In focusing on a specific event, it will be helpful in giving your paper a structure if you pose a question to yourself that your paper will seek to answer. For example, “Why was Sadat killed and why was this a significant event?”  You can then use your sources to answer this question.

 

You should not write in your opening paragraph, “In this essay I will try to answer the question, Why was Sadat killed….”  or anything like that.  Have you ever read an Los Angeles Times or Newsweek article that began, “In this article I will….”  There is a reason why you haven’t – it’s bad form. 

 

Instead, directly state your thesis without using the first person “I”: “By making peace with Israel, Egyptian President Anwar Sadat also made many enemies in the Arab world.  His death at the hands of extremists within the Muslim Brotherhood would have serious ramifications throughout the region.  Contemporary reactions to his death in Arab, Israeli, and American sources show that, even at the time, many realized his assassination had great significance.” 

 

Choosing sources

 

Once you have picked your topic, look for sources that are likely to give you different points of view.  If you are doing the Cuban Missile Crisis, for example, it makes sense to look for US, Soviet, and Cuban sources since it is very unlikely that these three sources will be telling the same story.  If you are doing any aspect of the Arab-Israeli-Palestinian crisis, you should try to find sources from both the Arab and Israeli perspectives. If you are doing a Latin American topic, try to find at least some sources that give the Latin American perspective.

 

Kinds of sources and finding sources

 

Newspaper accounts will provide the easiest access to your topic.  Read the straight news stories as well as the editorial page.  Editorials and articles by columnists that appear on the editorial pages will likely be more helpful in writing your essay since they tend to be more interpretative and offer insight on not only what happened, but why an event happened and why it is significant.

 

To find newspaper stories pertinent to your topic, you should use the New York Times index.  These are brownish-red bound volumes located on the table behind the reference desk on the main floor of Oviatt library. If your topic is the Yom Kippur War (1973), go to the 1973 volume and look up keywords that are related to your topic: “Sadat,” “Yom Kippur War,” “Middle East,” “Egypt,” “Israel,” and so on.  A list of cites will appear that give you the date and page # of the story. Then go upstairs to the microfilm room and find the New York Times on microfilm. If you cannot find the specific date you’re looking for, ask the assistant for help.

 

Magazine articles are also useful sources. To find articles on your topic, go to the Reader’s Guide to Periodical Literature (also located on the tables behind the reference desk – if you can’t find it, ask the reference librarian.) Choose the volume that covers the year of your event and look for keywords. When you find relevant articles, write down the magazine’s name and the date and page number of the article. Then go to the on-line catalog to see if the library has the magazine on the shelves or in storage. If it does, take down the call number and head to the fourth floor to find it. (All bound periodicals are on the fourth floor.)

 

Though these two indexes are useful for tracking down American sources, it may be more difficult to find foreign sources in English produced at the time of the event you choose (though the Economist and the London Times [both British sources] are both available at Oviatt Library). If you’re having trouble locating contemporary foreign sources, you might look for autobiographies of those who participated in or were witness to the event you are exploring.  For example, Khrushchev wrote an autobiography that would fill in the Soviet side if your topic were the Cuban Missile Crisis. Anwar Sadat’s widow wrote a memoir of her husband (available in English) that would “count” as an Arab source.  The Palestinian activist Hanan Ashrawi has also written extensively on the conflict with Israel. These books and articles would also “count” as a Palestinian source if she were directly describing her view of the event you are examining.  The best way to find these autobiographies is simply to do an author search on the on-line catalog, or, for articles, to do a keyword search using Expanded Academic Index. (Note that this link will only work if you are on campus using a CSUN computer.)

 

There are also compilations of primary documents that can be helpful.  The best way to find them is to do a keyword search on the on line library catalog and to include “sources” as one of your keywords.  Or, if you know the title of a book on your topic, look it up and then scroll down to the subject links (in blue) and click on them to see if they will lead you to further sources (they usually do!)

 

There are numerous foreign sources in English on the internet:

 

For a good source of documents from all over the world, see:

 http://www.fordham.edu/halsall/mod/modsbook4.html#since1945

 

The Latin American Network Information Center, http://www1.lanic.utexas.edu/, will be invaluable if you are doing a Central or South American topic.

 

The Cold War International History Project site has numerous primary sources and allows you to navigate the site by region or country: http://wwics.si.edu/index.cfm?fuseaction=topics.home&topic_id=1409

 

CNN’s Cold War site also has a variety of translated documents from various countries:

http://www.cnn.com/SPECIALS/cold.war/kbank/documents.html

 

As does The National Security Archive: http://www2.gwu.edu/~nsarchiv/ and

 

World History Archives: http://www.hartford-hwp.com/archives/index.html

 

(Don’t be put off by the strange home page, just use the search function and enter the country you are writing about. For example, here’s the link to the Rwanda archive:

http://www.hartford-hwp.com/archives/36/index-ja.html and the China archive:

http://www.hartford-hwp.com/archives/55/index-b.html)

 

For more Chinese sources, see:

 

http://www.fordham.edu/halsall/eastasia/eastasiasbook.html#China%20Since%20World%20War%20II

 

If you want basic background information on a particular country, go to the Library of Congress site: http://www.loc.gov/rr/research-centers.html and click on the appropriate link under “International Collections.”

 

Of course, www.google.com is a useful search engine.  The best way to get good hits is to enter the country or the topic you’re writing about and then the word “documents” or “primary sources.”

 

How to cite your sources

 

After giving this some consideration, I’ve come up with a simple system that I want all of you to follow.  Please follow these very simple instructions:

 

The last page of your paper should be a “References” page.  You should list all of your sources and assign a number to each reference. Then, each time you cite a particular source in the text of your essay, you should cite its number and the page # in parentheses. 

 

For example, if the source you’re citing is #1 on your reference page and you’re quoting from page 47 of that source, you should write the following in the text of your paper: (#1, p. 47) If your source is a web site (and therefore does not have a page number), it will be enough to do the following in the text: (#5, internet).  On your References page, you must give a number to each source and a full citation of each source. 

 

Web page references should include the entire URL and the date you accessed it. 

 

Example: http://www.cnn.com/SPECIALS/cold.war/episodes/01/documents/tehran.html, November 12, 2004.

 

Books should give the author, title, place of publication, publisher, and date of publication.  Publication information is usually on the title page. If there is no year of publication given there, it’s on the next page (the copyright page).

 

Example: Thomas L. Friedman, From Beirut to Jerusalem (New York: Farrar, Strauss & Giroux, 1989)

 

Magazine articles should give the title of the article, the author (if the author is identified), the name of the magazine, its publication date (May, 1967) or (January 28, 1972), and the pages that the article encompasses.

 

Example: Whittaker Chambers, “Truman Announces New Policy” Time (March 31, 1948), 34-5.

 

Newspaper articles require only the name of the paper, the date, and the page number(s).

 

Examples: Washington Post, February 29, 1980, 1, 36.

                    London Times, September 5, 1968, 2, 23.

                       

(Note that with the exception of the New York Times, only the name of the paper and not the city is underlined when citing newspapers.)

 

How many sources?

 

The minimum requirement is three sources – at least two of which must be non-U.S.  These sources must be referenced and discussed at some length in the body of your paper.  They must be either primary sources (published at the time of your event) or indirectly primary (written by people who were eyewitnesses to your event).  You are welcome (and encouraged) to use as many primary sources as you like as well as any secondary sources that would help in providing background material.  If you do the minimum amount of work, using the minimum number of sources, you should expect a passing grade, but not necessarily a high grade.

 

Structure of the paper

 

After reading the first paragraph your reader should already know:

 

1)      what your topic (or event) is

2)      what three perspectives you will be examining

3)      an indication from you as to why these three perspectives have different interpretations of your event or why the event you’ve chosen is significant.

 

There are two obvious ways to organize the body of your paper:

 

1)      by perspective (For example, the British view, followed by the American view, followed by the Soviet view)

2)      by theme (how each of your three sources interpret different facets of your topic)

 

The conclusion should not summarize or restate what you’ve said in the body of the essay. That’s fine for a twenty-page research paper, but not a short assignment like this one.  The conclusion should briefly tie together the essay and offer a parting thought.  For example,

 

“The divergence of opinion on the origins of the 1967 war demonstrates the difficulty of reaching consensus in discussions of Middle East politics.  Even nations like the United States and France, allies in the Cold War, offered clashing assessments of the conflict’s causes.  No surprise, then, that Egyptian and Israeli newspaper editorials, ostensibly reacting to the same set of facts, reached entirely different conclusions.”

 

Do not begin your concluding paragraph with, “In conclusion,”  I know your junior high teachers told you to do that.  They were wrong.